Four Gems

In mid 1900’s
In Eastern Australia
A gem was born
Her name is Jennifer

In the early 2000’s
In Nigeria and Canada
Three other gems were born
Tolu, Rania and Jatinpal

In 2018
In Western Canada
These four gems met
In Bow View Manor

This is the story of how I met Jennifer.

Jennifer was merely supposed to be a part of our creative writing project
Little did she know she would be much more

She is a wife
She is a mother
She is a grandmother

She taught us many great things through her words

Through her love of climbing
She taught us to explore

Through her love of medicine
She taught us to help

Through her love of geography
She taught us to embrace nature

Through her love of the weather
She taught us to open my eyes

Through her lack of regrets
She taught us to accept my mistakes

Through her love of religion
She taught us to have faith

Through her love of family
She taught us to love

In the short hour we spent with Jennifer, she taught us more than we’d like to admit

She taught us to embrace my flaws
She reminded us that finding the beauty in the ugliest of situations is important

She taught us the importance of finding the light at the end of the tunnel

She taught us to follow our dreams

She reminded us that being negative will take us nowhere

Jennifer will always remain in our hearts
But the lessons she taught us will last a lifetime.

 

This is a poem we wrote for Jennifer, a lovely lady who we had the pleasure to meet when we went to Bow View Manor for our creative writing class. This poem tells a few of the many lessons Jennifer taught us in the short amount of time we got to spend with her. We were very honored to learn all about Jennifer, who was able to tell us about all her wonderful stories, which she had not thought to be interesting, although they really were. She is such a humble person, and she lived and is still living her life to the fullest, and her words will remain with us forever.

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One thought on “Four Gems

  • Dear Rania,

    I really got this woman’s outlook from this poem. I saw it all play out before me. You were able to capture that attitude of hers. We can imagine an amazing woman, without a care in the world, living for herself being content. Her love for life is captured in the lines like “She adored it” and “She loved it”.

    A thing to watch for however, is (and I know this could be an artistic choice) showing not telling. With some poetry, you can’t focus solely on outer appearance, you have to find a metaphorical comparison. But that could be just me,. as that’s how I try to write poetry.

    I love your work and I hope you are in my creative writing class next year so I can pick your brain some more.

    Sincerely,

    Claire.P

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